After reading some of the papers, it did make me think a bit about my own. It got me to reread it aloud to myself and let me see a lot of errors I had in the paper. The idea of flow was what struck me the most. I am certainly no expert in the process but I did make a few minor adjustments to my paper both on the local and global scale. (Mostly the local scale!)
Reading out loud is an excellent revision strategy. When you use the word “flow,” do you mean how you transition from idea to idea/sentence to sentence?